Dominoes: And one Shall Fall Comments

[Spinning Hat]

That is a very nice continuation of your opening story into the DTM Bug, but maybe you might want to add a small disclamer for those who have not read the beginning from the beginning? <p><div align="center"><embed width="250" height="200" src="http://www.theta_mercenaries.homestead.com/files/sphat.swf"></div><p align=center><font color=#ff0000>Why Do I Always Die?!?!?!?!<p align=center>"Manly Men, Unite!"<i> -XMEN|Ambush Bug[DTM]</i></font></p></p><i></i>

[Ambush Bug]

Got it, Hat. I'll put a table of contents for each new section.<br><br>FYI, I've decided to put <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><i> Desecration</i><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> on hold until I get completely caught up in the re-write of the previous stories. I think <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><i> Dropship</i><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> won't have to be re-written from scratch, though I would like to fix a few niggling details. That'll leave <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><i> Dominoes, Damocles</i><!--EZCODE ITALIC END-->, and <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><i> Dismay</i><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> to re-write.<br> <p></p><i></i>

[Spinning Hat]

Fun fun! <p><div align="center"><embed width="250" height="200" src="http://www.theta_mercenaries.homestead.com/files/sphat.swf"></div><p align=center><font color=#ff0000>Why Do I Always Die?!?!?!?!<p align=center>"Manly Men, Unite!"<i> -XMEN|Ambush Bug[DTM]</i></font></p></p><i></i>

[RedSirus]

Dismay to rewrite? Didn't you just finish it? <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p></p><i></i>

[XMEN Ashaman DTM]

<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/laugh.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br> <p><br><img src=http://www.xmenclan.org/avatars/ashaman2.jpg width=150 align=left><br><left><a href=http://www.dragontalonmercs.com>Dragon Talon Mercenary</a><br><a href=http://www.xmenclan.org>Member of the XMEN</a><br>Have a Nice Day!<br><br>"Politics, war, martial arts;<br>these are tools to bend the <br>universe to your will."</left><br><br><br><p><i>Edited by: <a href=http://pub3.ezboard.com/uxmengambit.sho ... ge=EN>XMEN Gambit</a> <img src=http://www.xmenclan.org/images/x.gif> at: 7/14/02 8:16:26 pm</i></p></p><i></i>

[XMEN Ashaman DTM]

BTW, this story is pretty good!<br><br> <p></p><i>Edited by: <A HREF=http://pub141.ezboard.com/bxmenclan.sho ... andtm>XMEN Ashaman DTM</A>&nbsp; <IMG SRC="http://theta_mercenaries.homestead.com/files/xmen.gif" BORDER=0> at: 10/26/02 1:41:05 pm<br></i>

[Scorch]

You thought about putting these up on a webpage somewhere? <p><A HREF=mailto:sirscorch@excite.com ></A> <br>Embedded Objects not allowed<br> <PARAM NAME=movie VALUE="http://www.angelfire.com/games/scorchdtm/Scorch.swf"> <PARAM NAME=quality VALUE=high> <PARAM NAME=bgcolor VALUE=#000000> not allowed</EMBED><br></OBJECT><br></p><i></i>

[Scorch]

I love the new section good writing <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> I wish I had more time to devote to writing. O well reading will have to be enough for now (maybe... <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> ) <p></p><i></i>

[Sir Diesal0t]

VGCA (psycho voice) <p><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>-LSD-</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--><!--EZCODE BR START-->
<!--EZCODE BR END--><br><!--EZCODE HR START--><hr /><!--EZCODE HR END--><br><!--EZCODE IMAGE START--><img src="http://communities.msn.com/_Secure/0PgA ... <!--EZCODE IMAGE END--><!--EZCODE BR START-->
<!--EZCODE BR END-->Upon their deaths:<!--EZCODE BR START-->
<!--EZCODE BR END--><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>"F***ing Lag!"</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> - [XMEN]Ravok <!--EZCODE BR START-->
<!--EZCODE BR END--> <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>"WTF? No respawn?"</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> - [XMEN]Spinning Hat<!--EZCODE BR START-->
<!--EZCODE BR END--><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>(SoUP)Sir Diesalot</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--></p><i></i>

[Spinning Hat]

Very nice. I can only imagine who the HERC pilot turns out to be.. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/laugh.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE FONT START--><span style="color:red;font-family:arial;font-size:xx-large;"><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>I HATE EZBOARD!!!</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--></span><!--EZCODE FONT END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>

[Ambush Bug]

Yes, I am scum for not updating sooner. But, if you've been keeping up with my rants, you'll have a pretty good idea that work in general has been making my life quite miserable.<br><br>There's been a couple of bright spots lately, and I'm moving, so I expect my muse will come further out of hiding soon. I hope to really get back on the wagon once I'm all moved over to the new place and I have some plants in the window and a few hundred extra bucks a month to spare.<br><br>In any case, enjoy this add-on... and aplogies to TA for mucking up her name in Due Process, hence the little tri-D chess bit. Thanks for helping me out with your character, too, TA--made this much easier to write. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p></p><i></i>

[Spinning Hat]

Damn... Who'd a thunk a Hangar could lend so much to the story? AS always, good work AB. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :D --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/happy.gif ALT=":D"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE FONT START--><span style="color:red;font-family:arial;font-size:xx-large;"><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>I HATE EZBOARD!!!</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--></span><!--EZCODE FONT END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>

[Scorch]

Goodwork Scum... err Bug <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>Very nice... Very Very Nice.<br><br><!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p></p><i></i>

[Ambush Bug]

Surpriiiiise! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>Had a nice evening with my muse and got some more done. I'm frankly pretty surprised the move has taken this much out of me: seems like things are finally, finally slipping back into gear in my head. <p></p><i></i>

[Spinning Hat]

Yummy! Excellent as always Bug. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :D --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/happy.gif ALT=":D"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Lots of humor, and a good intro to the landing and liberation of Reach IV. I can only wait to see how the DTM handle the Maurauders. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :D --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/happy.gif ALT=":D"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><!--EZCODE HR START--><hr /><!--EZCODE HR END--><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><br><!--EZCODE FONT START--><span style="color:red;font-family:Arial;font-size:medium;"><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>"Never, Never, Never Quit"</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> -Winston Churchill</span><!--EZCODE FONT END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>